Throughout this awesome design of things you'll receive  a B- for effort and hard work. Exactly where you lost me was in the details. As people say, details make or break the argument.. And it couldn't be more correct here. Having said that, permit me inform you precisely what did do the job. Your article (parts of it) is incredibly persuasive which is possibly why I am taking the effort to comment. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. Second, although I can easily see a jumps in logic you come up with, I am definitely not sure of how you appear to connect the points which inturn make the final result. For now I will, no doubt subscribe to your point however wish in the future you connect your dots better.